http://toomomforyou.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] toomomforyou.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] yukinoomoni 2009-04-04 10:27 pm (UTC)

in chapter 2, i think the phrase is incomplete: the words just wouldn’t come out. She just couldn’t bring herself to utter the.

it's really good :D please keep me updated whenever you write more!
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