yukinoomoni: (Laugh)
Omoni ([personal profile] yukinoomoni) wrote2009-04-16 02:27 pm
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Ah, my sister

[livejournal.com profile] mistress_gwen says:
UGH WRITE THE LAST SENTENCE OF THIS REVIEW FOR ME

[livejournal.com profile] yukinoomoni says:
Thus, having good sex is what makes good fiction. The end

[livejournal.com profile] mistress_gwen says:
But the sex isn't actually all that great

[livejournal.com profile] yukinoomoni says:
Thus, the lack of good sex makes this story fall short. Too bad

[livejournal.com profile] mistress_gwen says:
It's a good story!

[livejournal.com profile] yukinoomoni says:
Thus, maybe you should write your own last sentence, instead of getting
someone who hasn't read the story to do it.

[livejournal.com profile] mistress_gwen says:
lol
FINE