Ah, my sister
Apr. 16th, 2009 02:27 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
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UGH WRITE THE LAST SENTENCE OF THIS REVIEW FOR ME
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Thus, having good sex is what makes good fiction. The end
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But the sex isn't actually all that great
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Thus, the lack of good sex makes this story fall short. Too bad
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It's a good story!
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Thus, maybe you should write your own last sentence, instead of getting
someone who hasn't read the story to do it.
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lol
FINE